User talk:Raby Manon/Climate change adaptation in the Philippines

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php - philippines peso

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inconsistent in writing eco-town vs ecotown Mikaelaswildlife (talk) 14:47, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Peer Edits David
The intro is a bit abrupt, you could add a couple of lines to set the context of what you're talking about.

Some of the paragraphs are quite long and could be broken up, especially in the National-level adaptation section. Also, when you discuss the UNFCCC, since this concerns international negotiations and provisions, it could have its own subsection inside national-level adaption or an entire section to itself. This would help break up the article a bit.

The article structure is strong and comprehensive, perhaps the last thing to add would be a section to discuss criticisms to how adaptation has been undertaken, or the way this has played out in public opinion and the media in the Philippines.

Nice work! ToroRana (talk) 15:39, 3 April 2023 (UTC)