User talk:RachaelMarieDalPorto/sandbox

Aaron Sabin (talk) 23:00, 19 April 2020 (UTC) I know you are still working on the draft like I am, but there are a couple things I noticed.

The info in the "Operations" section needs citations. I like how you are adding more about the operations of the plant in this section. Looking at the main wikipedia article, I noticed this section has very little about the actual operations. There is other info there about whether or not the plant can handle the increased volume that you may consider putting in another section (such as the Operation section below) or making a sub-heading.

Another thing you might want to consider is the balance of the article. The original article already seems pretty skewed towards talking about the upgrade projects and it seems you have more to add (which is good!). I might look at expanding other sections, such as the operation section, to make sure the article covers all topics with equal weight. I think there is a lot of room to expand there by explaining each step it takes for water to be treated and sent for use.

Overall, I think you are on the right track and I know you are still in the early stages of your draft just like I am.