User talk:Rachelatomanuk

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Hello, Rachelatomanuk, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Good job! Just check your sources, they don't appear to be academic

Melaniehuska (talk) 01:13, 2 April 2017 (UTC) 

Melaniehuska (talk) 16:57, 11 April 2017 (UTC) Comments on Wiki Draft:

1. There is considerable overlap between your section and the current section on "Crops." 2. "Most of which were introduced to the Peruvians through other cultures" not true. where did you get this? 3. streamline sentences 2 and 3 into one. 4. You need citation for " The early inhabitants of Peru started farming a couple of main crops such as cotton, peppers, beans, rice, corn, and squash." Also, provide date 5. None of your sources are academic