User talk:Rachelatomanuk/sandbox

Melaniehuska (talk) 16:32, 11 April 2017 (UTC)

The use of photos really helps this article be strong as vision is an important part of the eating process. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nheim1 (talk • contribs) 18:56, 24 April 2017 (UTC)

The breakdown of the sections into subsections helps give a better idea of the topic and its complexity. Some of the crops listed I do not know what they are, so it would be more helpful to have links to direct towards the page in case other readers, similar to me, do not know what they are. If the links were there, it would give immediate knowledge of the crops and better understanding of what the main topic has in it -- literally. The crops are vital to the Peruvian Cuisine since it makes the dishes. The use of pictures for the food is helpful because I would not know what they looked like if it was only mentioned. The visual helps extremely. This could be just a personal preferences, but for the food descriptions, it would not seem as hefty of a section if the two paragraphs were split into about four. Livrich95 (talk) 18:28, 26 April 2017 (UTC)