User talk:Rachelloreus/sandbox

Cole's Peer Review 1.) There seems to be neutrality within the additions that plan to be made which is good. Fortunately there is not one bias leading the information to be useful.

2.) The changes/additions that are going to be made all seem to be sufficient as they will talk about withdrawal symptoms, people at risk, and more recent information found.

3.) The citations used for the changes/additions all seem relevant and reliable sources that are appropriate for Wikipedia.

4.) The language, tone and clarity are good for drafting but should be revised for final edits.

5.) The edits all fulfill the assignment instructions and format as there are three changes/additions. The citations are listed but will need to be directly linked to the edit when finalizing.

Peer Review by Olivia

1) There is no bias for this editor in their article.

2) There is sufficiant amount of information that will be added but also a lot taken out from the original article.

3) Each piece of information has a source and but did not to the citation yet.

4) So far everything seems to be clear and simple and easy to comprehend.

5) There sufficient amount of sources but citiations have not been formatted yet.

Peer Review Response
After reading over the reviews I got for my edits for the article, there seems that I need to do one or to things so that the assignment can be fully completed. Most comments were positive feedback which is nice to know. But in one or two responses it tells me to add citations but thats only because I haven't fully made edits to the parts of the article I want to edit. Another one was that I should have my edits be re-edited before the final submission so that everything is clear and precise. Overall the reviews I got for my edits were helping feedback that I would definitely apply to my work so that in the end the changes I make to the article will be helpful for other who would be reading it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rachelloreus (talk • contribs) 18:43, 30 April 2018 (UTC)