User talk:Rachitasinha28/sandbox/K Ramnath Chandrasekhar

Comment: This is a good start. To improve it:

Fix the unclear "[14]" citation in the text. Specify which statement(s) general reference The New Indian Expresssupports by adding inline citations in the manner of the other references. The theearthheros.com reference is a dead link. Is it needed, or can it be replaced by another source that supports the statement where it is cited? The "Environmental Awards" reference doesn't mention Ramnath, so what is the point of citing it? Can it be replaced by another source that supports the statement where it is cited? The New Indian Express, Sanctuary Asia, and the "In Focus" article are sufficient to demonstrate notability. Concentrate on those high-quality sources. Try to use them to replace sources that make only passing mention of Ramnath, such as "An ode to our amazing home" and "Mountains on his mind". If you need help with the mechanics of citing sources, see WP:REFB. Tone down the prose by removing adjectives like "award-winning", "acclaimed", and "lush". (See WP:WTW.) Write prose that will stand for a long time instead of quickly becoming dated. Phrases like "nearing a decade" will be incorrect shortly. (See WP:RELTIME.)

-- Worldbruce (talk) 23:46, 27 June 2017 (UTC)