User talk:RacineZoo

January 2014
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Racine Zoo
Thank you for trying to help improve the Racine Zoo article. The material that you added sounds more like a promotional brochure than an encyclopedia, and does not follow the general format used by most other zoo articles. We also don't generally include things like mission statements, which pretty much sound the same for all zoos. If you want to help expand the article, I would suggest first reading a few other of the longer zoo articles to see generally how they are laid out and referenced. San Diego Zoo, Bronx Zoo, and Phoenix Zoo should all be fairly representative. Also, most of this material seems to be just copied and pasted from the Web, which is not allowed on Wikipedia (this is at least plagiarism, and may also violate copyrights). I have reverted your additions until such time as they can be rewritten in a more encyclopedic tone without violating copyrights. Don Lammers (talk) 16:17, 3 January 2014 (UTC)