User talk:RadhaKulkarni

Hi. Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. Unfortunately, your material on the New York Legal Assistance Group is far, far, far too much like an advertisement. I have trimmed it down substantially. DS 16:05, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

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You can add more information, but be aware that if it starts sounding like an endorsement again, it will be trimmed again.

One thing to keep in mind is that you should be doing this from the encyclopedia's viewpoint, not the NYLAG's viewpoint. Sentences containing "we" are to be avoided, for instance, as are lengthy lists of information that would be of interest only to your clients. DS 16:45, 22 August 2006 (UTC)