User talk:RadicalDolphin2/sandbox

Article Evaluation by PondMatt

Content - Existing content is thorough and notes indicate plans to expand further on incomplete points.

Tone - Tone is informative and neutral, with no apparent bias.

Sources - Bibliography section looks good so far - more sources could probably be found by perusing related articles for material on this topic.

Talk Page - Expansion is needed here. The article is C-Class and of interest to 3 different wikiprojects.

Peer Review - Rb1359
Overall, this is well done! The tone is neutral, and the references you use are from reliable, unbiased sources. The changes you made to the first sentence are good and make the topic much easier to understand. The examples you use are also good and are relevant to the topic. However, there are some grammatical problems. In the birds section, the second sentence is fairly long. To make it easier to read and flow better, you could consider starting a new sentence after “the bordering population’s’. The paragraph on Pygmy Marmosets is confusing to read. The sentence structure needs to be revised and some words seem to be missing. In the second last sentence in the baboon section, the sentence "The mothers never bark back" should be changed to "The mother never barks back" to stay consistent with the rest of the paragraph. Rb1359 (talk) 02:35, 8 November 2018 (UTC)