User talk:Raerose

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Hello, Raerose, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer review
I love what sections you wrote in your article. The sentences you wrote added to the overall substance without redirecting the attention away from the rest of the information that was already present. Your information seemed fairly balanced. I couldn't sense any bias, and the words used seemed neutral in tone. Where you can improve the most is just adding more sources. The sources you already have present seem strong and needed in your article. --Jperry98 (talk) 00:00, 2 December 2018 (UTC)