User talk:Raise cain/sandbox

Some feedback on the cyberfeminism page: - could add links to wiki articles in the last sentence of first paragraph (to third wave feminism, etc) - also hyperlink to 1997 Old Boys Network's100 anti-theses - add citation to the quotations in theoretical background - take out “in recent years” replace with late 2010s - add more references in critiques? Like where to look for readings on cyberfeminism and whiteness - shortening further reading section, maybe include pre-existing external links? - looks awesome, lots of improvement and definition section is particularly strong. I see you cut the section that was there on listservs--no longer relevant? Rsg1magic (talk) 14:20, 3 August 2018 (UTC)