User talk:Raltoma1/sandbox

Your editing was done incorrectly; dashes are not how you do lists. There is no citation information, I just see numbers. Where is the citation information? Spelling and grammar mistakes. "In other words, persuasion occurs at the end of the process where a person understands a message then compares the position it advocates to the person's position on that issue."--this sentence does not clarify, but obfuscates instead. The next part starting "This particular position": it is unclear whose position; the "persuader" or the "persuadee". Because you edited it in one go, I can't see the history. Is this not your final version? Please come to my office hours to discuss this.