User talk:Ramankalaic/sandbox

Raman

OMG! Is this topic a passion (or obsession) of yours? Sure, go for it. Maybe post to the article Talk page to see if anyone has any suggestions. TomHaffie (talk) 01:50, 23 October 2014 (UTC)

Professor Haffie,

A large part of the book I was reading for the review deals with these epigenetic changes, and I believe epigenetic changes are overlooked when talking about repercussions of our life choices. Instead of having warnings against personal afflictions that cigarettes etc. would have on the user, I think possibly appealing to their offspring's well being will influence their decisions in an evolutionary way that will offset the whole "It's my body I can do what I want" attitude towards these destructive behaviours. Although the science doesn't seem to be completely elucidated yet, I think bringing the potential effects to a wide audience early on could have a positive effect on personal choices. Also, it seems to be a hot topic in recent publications (according to Google Scholar results) so the expansive collection of references reflects that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ramankalaic (talk • contribs) 19:05, 24 October 2014 (UTC)

OK, you have created a comprehensive draft that is already over 350 words. Maybe you should just stick to tobacco smoking? I'm sorry but you haven't included any references cited in WP format. It isn't clear that you know how to do this so I can't give you full marks for the draft. : (

Grade 1.5/2 TomHaffie (talk) 03:51, 11 November 2014 (UTC)