User talk:Ramisha Ashfaq

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Hello, Ramisha Ashfaq, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback request
Hi. I took at look at your article draft. It looks like a good start, but there are a few things you should improve.


 * The article should begin with a lead section that summarizes everything in the article. The first sentence should be a statement of what the article is about. Something like

It needs to be something that can tell the reader, right away, what the article is about. Many people never read past that first line - they just want a brief sense of what the topic is.


 * You need to use inline references, and make sure that they're properly formatted, not just URLs. If you use the Cite tool on the Visual Editor, you will be able to do this automatically. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:30, 23 June 2016 (UTC)