User talk:RanLearns

Your submission at Articles for creation: Al Nilsen (June 15)
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IceWelder &#91; &#9993; &#93; 12:58, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Al Nilsen (June 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nomadicghumakkad was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 14:24, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Al Nilsen
Hello, RanLearns. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Al Nilsen, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again&#32;or request that it be moved to your userspace.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:02, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Al Nilsen


Hello, RanLearns. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Al Nilsen".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 22:02, 21 June 2022 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Al Nilsen (February 21)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Asilvering was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


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asilvering (talk) 02:45, 21 February 2023 (UTC)


 * May I be allowed to ask for clarification on your comment? You said "Most of the statements in this article aren't about Nilsen at all" and reading through it again, every single statement is about Nilsen and the work he has done in the industry.
 * The only part in the article I submitted that "isn't about Nilsen" is the short Console Wars section. I can remove that section, but I had included it since the book is heavily made up of quotes from Al Nilsen, and the documentary shows many interviews with Nilsen. The Console Wars book and documentary have brought new attention to Al's work in choosing Sonic as Sega's mascot, coming up with the idea for the first ever global release date, and spearheading a unique playtesting mall tour which was widely covered by the media and helped to skyrocket Sonic's popularity near the previously untouchable Mario franchise. RanLearns (talk) 16:37, 21 February 2023 (UTC)