User talk:Ransobe

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Hi I am the one that compressed most of your first draft of tungsten pentabromide, and I just did it again. So let me explain. The initial draft had some very useful content for which Wikipedia's readers must be indebted to you. The core content was retained. Your contribution however read like a school essay and the style of the writing was often inappropriate. We do not give "tips" or procedural advice as a matter of policy as explained in WP:NOT. So be glad that the core of your material had impact and not contrite that your article was heavily edited by others with more experience. We hope that you might contribute to other articles, but be prepared for your stuff to be reworked by people you don't know and who might know a whole lot more about the topic. BTW, the main thing we are missing is the W--W distance since von Schering's article was published in a fairly obscure journal that is not on-line. Comments, esp constructive criticism are welcome,--Smokefoot (talk) 14:08, 8 October 2011 (UTC)