User talk:Rar111

Rip Radcliff
Okay, everything you say is true. The story is that I'm Rip's grandson and my father, Rip jr. gave me a briefcase full of articles about him as a keepsake last week. I lifted a 1956 Oklahoma newspaper article almost word for word and that's why it sounds so folksy..I'm not even sure how to you respond in this format. And I must say you're "I'm going to turn blue" comment put a thought baloon with a question mark in it above my head....So help me out. My grandfather had this great career and I've got all this neat information about him that I'd like to share with Wiii people.....

I've again reverted your addition to this article, but wanted to explicitly let you know why, as you're new here. There are two fundamental problems. First, it needs citations - read this: Verifiability for "why" and this: Cite for "how". The second issue is with the tone - it's informal and promoting the subject. This: Tone will explain.

Both of these problems can be overcome and I've placed a copy of your text here: User:Rar111/Rip Radcliff so you can work it until it's ready for insertion into the article. I'm willing to help you with this process, as there's good info in your edit. Majorclanger (talk) 13:04, 11 February 2010 (UTC)