User talk:Rashmi Naik

November 2017
Hello, I'm GrapefruitSculpin. I noticed that you made a change to an article, Modernization theory, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. GS ⋙ ☎ 07:43, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

Regarding Source
Ya I did cite that the defination is taken from Cambridge dictionary and the meaning of the word Modern is from Oxford Dictionary.. Rashmi Naik (talk) 07:47, 24 November 2017 (UTC)


 * That's not a citation, nor is it how sources are cited on English Wikipedia, and your interpretation of that definition in relation to the subject is an example of original research or synthesis. Those wikilinks are excellent resources for adding material that meets WP:POLICY. - GS ⋙ ☎ 08:09, 24 November 2017 (UTC)


 * Also, checkout WP:TONE. This is not the type of formal language used on the encyclopedia (emphasis mine): "So we can conclude that modernization is somewhat a "change"and "change" is something neutral, it does not indicate any direction for better or for the worse,it is relative to time and space not to result. So we can say that Modernization is the "Change that we adopt to keep us with pace with rest of the enviroment,it is not always progressive it can be reactionary too.""


 * Then take a look at MOS:RELTIME. Time-sensitivity is an important consideration, when your additions have potential to remain in place indefinitely. An example from your work (emphasis mine): If we take example of dressing trends,say Plazo,and there is a huge market for it nowadays it cant be said that we have developed some extraordinary dress for we should not forget that Plazos were in trend in late 1960s and if now we have scheduled it in list of modern dressing style it only because its in trend or so what modern.


 * English Wikipedia's Manual of style covers all of that, in greater detail. Or, checkout the beginners' guide. - GS ⋙ ☎ 08:23, 24 November 2017 (UTC)