User talk:Rassidatou/sandbox

Peer Review, by Christopher Ibasan

Ministry of Health and Family Welfare

Excellent critical analysis of the ministry of health and family welfare page.

Excellent introduction to National Cancer Control Program and National Cancer Registry Programme. It is neutral tone. Can include more specific details. What did the National Cancer Control Program educate people on and what resources did they provide?

What other programs did the National Cancer Registry Programme have?

Expand more on the barriers that prevent people from accessing the program? The financial, geographic, or political barriers to it. Challenges or Negatives within the program.

Other informative issues that you can include is the impact and sustainability of these programs

Epidemiology of Breast Cancer

I appreciate your decision to write more information about breast cancer in Africa countries and that you are approaching breast cancer in a holistic approach and not have narratives over-represented over others.

Besides the fact that breast cancer is diagnosed at later stages, what are some reasons for the mortality rates? Cultural, social, and biological reasons for the higher mortality rate due to breast cancer? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cibasan (talk • contribs) 01:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)