User talk:Rattia1/sandbox

Hello team 16,

Your IRAC and neutral voiced summary are both really well written. I think that your sentence "Ultimately, it would be a judgement call to decide whether he truly is an employee…" would be more successful in the conclusion section, because it is an answer to the question proposed in the issue section. Lastly, I noticed that your source (Findlaw) did not provide references to any primary sources that it would have used in putting together its article. It is possible that another source could better support your statements. Overall excellent job! --Nkimmett1 (talk) 19:44, 5 April 2020 (UTC)