User talk:Raulcab/sandbox

Hi Raul,

This seems like an interesting article, and I am looking forward to reading more about it as you add on. I listed a couple suggestions below to help you get started and brain storm ideas.

Suggestions: -First sentence is a bit awkward. “…and whose main goal…” -Include Headings (History/Background, Mission/Goal, etc.) -Include Citations -How was this platform made? What coding language was it written in? -Give a brief overview about how the platform is utilized -Who has access? -How does it make citizens vote responsibly? -What is the voting process like? -Examples of times it has been utilized. -Reliability. Concerns about its security. Li.andy (talk) 19:35, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

Hey, Andy Thank you for your feedback I went back to my article and did fix the part who higlighted I believe it is much better now. I aslo took you adivce and went on to find more sources. If there is anything else that I can do to fix my article dont hestitate to let me know! Thanks again, Raulcab (talk) 04:34, 3 April 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review for Arena Electoral
Sorry I didn't review your article earlier! I really like what you have written so far in the summary section for the article. However in the last sentence of the summary you write that the platform allowed citizens to vote for the best policy maker. This sounds like a goal that the platform would like to accomplish, but that there isn't necessarily evidence to back it up. I would recommend maybe moving it down to the Mission section, to describe the theory behind the platform, so that your article remains neutral. Have any studies been conducted on the impact of the use of this software during the election? Or maybe general theory about how a platform like this could have an impact on an election? From the limited googling that I have done, I am seeing that there isn't very much information available out there about Arena Electoral specifically, so I was thinking you could find some similar projects out there that have similar goals and link to those from your article to give some more information. Or maybe make the article about the entire Fundación Ethos and include a section about Arena Electoral? Good luck and let me know if you want me to edit it again later! Claradm (talk) 22:42, 10 April 2018 (UTC)