User talk:Ray Ray 2time/Veterans Memorial Boulevard

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There's not much to work with here so far. Even in this short passage, you are already missing citations for information that you need to credit. You also need to watch the tone. This is too informal. You're not writing a tourist guide. Present the facts, not a guided tour.

JT: (talk) 19:08, 11 March 2021 (UTC)