User talk:RaymosXN40/Archive 2

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Nomination for deletion of Template:ABQRide Rapid Ride
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Proposed deletion of List of ABQ RIDE Transit routes


The article List of ABQ RIDE Transit routes has been proposed for deletion&#32; because of the following concern:
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Nomination of List of ABQ RIDE Transit routes for deletion
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Submission Declined by you : Articles for creation/Ashok Bajpai
Hi,

As per your message, the submission was declined with a comment 'Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia.' I would clarify here that the article which exists in Wikipedia incorrectly redirects 'Ashok Bajpai' to 'Ashok Vajpeyi' a poet. The article I created is about person named 'Ashok Bajpai' a politician and not 'Ashok Vajpeyi' the poet. So, I believe the subject of my article does not already exist in Wikipedia. Please do the needful. Also let me know if I need to resubmit.

Pytiwari (talk) 16:16, 1 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Yes, A suggestion I made (after another detailed reading) is to use a title such as Ashok Bajpai (Politician), which will make it easier to identify, and prevent other reviewers from making the same mistake. I do apologize for the confusion. PLease resubmit for review, and we will get to it!®amos likes messages! 16:27, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

Submission Declined by you : Articles for creation/Ashok Bajpai
I have now moved the article to 'Ashok Bajpai (Politician)' to avoid any confusion and resubmitted. Please take a look.

Pytiwari (talk) 17:19, 1 May 2014 (UTC)

Review on ProEvents page
Hi

Please find the link below of the page you reviewed previously: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/ProEvents

Thank you very much for your review & comments made. I understand your point of notability, so after the review last time, I've added one more reference which is "specifically about organisation itself", so altogether is two articles "specifically about organisation itself" (Ref no.4, 5&6), which are from Malaysia & Hong Kong respectively.

Moreover, before I created the page, I've actually read some similar pages for reference, which "World Sport Group" is one of them. (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/World_Sport_Group) They only had 3 references with none of them is "specifically about organisation itself", so I would have a question of how many "specifically about organisation itself" references is enough to get the approval?

As ProEvents is an event management company, so it works as back-stage to support the football teams in Asia. Thus, there is relatively less chance for ProEvents to be reported as "specifically about organisation itself".

However, as you know, football business & the commercial value of the top football teams is becoming significantly high in Asia, and under the age of information-explosive, the people are interested to know who brought the teams to Asia over the years to make the football fans a series of enjoyments every summer, so you could see from the references that the articles start giving part of contents to introduce ProEvents, and two of them are "specifically about organisation itself".

As a result, I would like to sincerely ask for an approval for the page I created that have two references "specifically about organisation itself" and lots of supporting references.

Thank you very much in advance and please kindly advise if I have any misunderstanding.

Regards & thanks

Pem816 (talk) 02:57, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

Hi

Hope you are good! It's been a month didn't hear from you, can you please comment on my feedback above?

Other than references, I've also deleted those content which may possibly breach WP:NOTADVERT according to your advice.

Thank you very much and looking forward to your reply.

Regards & thanks

Pem816 (talk) 09:21, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

The Alexander Scott review https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Alexander_Scott
I really do not understand this talk talkback situation, and please don't send me to the template, because I don't understand that either.

I appreciate your feedback and I will work on the review again. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Alexander_Scott

Take care!

-- Barbara Emanuele — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xenobia219 (talk • contribs) 19:22, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

What I'm concerned with is this article reads more like an opinion piece or a short story, not an encyclopedia article. The first phrase thhat concerns me is '' "In any case, it cannot be said that Scott’s early life boded well for his later success." '', which is an opinion. That entire paragraph also seems to follow in that pattern.

The second issue is sources. This article has very little in the way of third party references: (Not the company who created this character (NBC.) (The first party), or you, the writer of this article (the second party).

take a look at Gregory House, The Main character from the television show House. This article represents a fine balance of third party writing, and lack of opinions. What also helps that article, and could help this one, is information about the actor who portrays this character, and how he was chosen.

I hope this was of more help, and I wish you the best writing this! ®amos likes messages! 22:09, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the help with Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/List of Ben &
That makes perfect sense. I just submitted my request for a username change. That's also a good point about most of the material being on the main company's website. Sad, but true. It's worth noting that around 70-80 of the flavors are not pulled from the main website. Maybe the list should only contain those flavors?

Thanks for appreciating how much work I put into that table! Whew!! My hope was to improve the current article List of Ben & Jerry's ice creams which has significant problems. I figured it would be easier starting from scratch rather than tweaking it. I have been collecting Ben & Jerry's flavors for 14 years and I've never seen a list as thorough and well-documented, so I will keep asking for advice from other editors and if worse comes to worse at least I have the ultimate flavors list. Ha!

Thanks again for your help, it means a lot. Best, Benandjerrysflavors (talk) 18:41, 3 May 2014 (UTC)

Article for creation
I got the message you left on my talkpage, but I am not sure which message I am supposed to read? Can you be specific? Thanks. Candleabracadabra (talk) 22:30, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Declined submission of article for Doppler Studios
Hi, thanks for the help with this article submission; the ADR list and the musical clientele lists ARE pared down quite a bit already, to the most notable in each category (almost all of whom have their own Wikipedia pages already)--I actually left a LOT of stuff out since it seemed less well-known than the stuff I left in--but I am happy to whittle them both down even more. That's no problem at all. But how would I address the conflict of interest issue?Stephen at Doppler (talk) 16:08, 7 May 2014 (UTC)

Declined submission of article for Badlands Unlimited
Hi, thanks for reviewing my article. I made the edits you suggested (removed company claim..., youtube as one of the refs, updated the company logo file, which is now pending OTRS approval). Could you take a look again and suggest any changes I might consider before re-submitting? Thanks in advance! Matthewyso (talk) 19:03, 2 June 2014 (UTC)

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AfC notification: Draft:4INFO has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:4INFO. Thanks!  DGG ( talk ) 01:39, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

21:23:19, 7 July 2014 review of submission by Ronkeobajimi
AlpCode 21:23, 7 July 2014 (UTC)

Hi, regarding the article Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dag Arne Osvik you declined, I have edited the article and made the changes you suggested. I tried to model it along the lines of Dag Arne Osvik's colleagues who already have Wikipedia articles (Jacob Appelbaum, Alexander Sotirov, Arjen Lenstra). Please review the article again and let me know if there is anything to amend before I re-submit the article. Thank you.AlpCode 21:23, 7 July 2014 (UTC)

Albuquerque Rapid Transit
Thanks for fixing that reference for me on the new ART page, I guess I didn't check it as well as I thought I had. Sorry about putting in that last sentence without a reference, that was just a piece of info that one of the people working on ART mentioned. It wasn't a certain event, but he said it was very likely they would just retire them at that point because of age. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.222.211.28 (talk) 13:46, 16 October 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for adding those notes to the Frontier Restaurant article.
The problems have been corrected, that was just simple poor copy-editing on my part. If there are still problems feel free to discuss them on my talk page. By the by, I like your proposed New NMRX, though I do recommend linking to articles related to the stops, ie "KWA Kewa Pueblo". But, other than that, I think it would be a fabulous addition to that article. Smile Lee (talk) 13:08, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

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