User talk:Raz hazon

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Hello, Raz hazon, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions, especially your edits to Ron Assouline. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are a few links to pages you might find helpful:
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Feedback on Ron Assouline
Hello,

I took a look at your article and did some cleanup. The first thing to keep in mind is that Wikipedia articles must not be written like resumes. This means that they must be neutral and flow like a text. Also, please avoid abreviations (TV, expo etc.). It's main problem now is that it needs more sources to back up what you have written. Unfortunately, I don't speak Hebrew, so my ability to find sources is limited. Hope that makes things more clear. Happy editing! Happy Squirrel (talk) 15:45, 1 August 2015 (UTC)