User talk:ReJeanneSmith/article draft

First, what does the article do well? The author who wrote the article understands the text well. They capture the essence and nuance present in Baldwin's writing.

Is there anything from your review that impressed you? I was impressed by their ability to explain Baldwin's essay in a unique and engaging way without going off topic.

'''What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?''' I would suggest playing with sentence structure, because it could possibly guide the article in an organized way.

'''What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article? Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!''' The author could improve on providing more references that will supplement their article. Yes, I noticed this article is clear and to the point. I also wish to create something similar.

Fababean (talk) 03:36, 31 October 2019 (UTC)