User talk:Realyuang/sandbox

I'm remaking my sandbox page since it was deleted. Realyuang (talk) 23:50, 11 February 2019 (UTC)

Could you take a look at my article before I move it again? Thanks!


 * I'll give you more feedback later, but one thing I think is important to keep in mind is that part of the problem is the amount of links to Kith.com seems spammy. So I would cut those and focus on drawing information from the NYtimes, WSJ, and GQ material. Groceryheist (talk) 20:11, 13 February 2019 (UTC)