User talk:Rebecca Potts/Betty Willis (artist)/SWB327 Peer Review


 * The new information you have in your draft about the Moulin Rouge Hotel and the details about the design for the Del Mar Hotel sign will be a good expansion on the current article.
 * Add sub-headings to the Biography section?
 * Would it be relevant to add information about the importance of these hotels(land marks?).
 * This may be beyond the scope of the class but would it be good to add a line to each of the Hotels wikis about Willis' design of the signs? SWB327 (talk) 04:58, 19 March 2021 (UTC)