User talk:Recklessabrandon

Explaining why I reverted your edit
Hi Recklessabrandon, and welcome to Wikipedia! I reverted your first edit on the Etsy article, and I wanted to explain why. It's important for additions to be cited to reliable sources, especially additions of controversial statements (see Verifiability), and it's also important for additions to be phrased neutrally instead of sounding like opinions (see Neutral point of view). I'd suggest finding reliable sources (such as newspaper or magazine articles) that cover these issues, and then rewriting the paragraph based on those references. Feel free to post a draft to Talk:Etsy to ask for suggestions instead of just getting reverted. Also, you marked the edit "minor", but that was a major edit. I hope this explanation is helpful to you; I'm happy to answer questions if you have any. Dreamyshade (talk) 09:57, 11 September 2013 (UTC)