User talk:Red027

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Hello, Red027, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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VerdantAurum's Acute stress disorder Article Peer Review
Good Evening Red027! Firstly, I would like to commend you for choosing such an important topic such as you did. I like that you included a "Notes" section in your sandbox to organise your throughts and remind yourself what needs work in your article. Personally, I think this is a very good idea. You could possibly consider dating when you make new contributions to your draft to keep even better track of how your article is progressing. Your intended contributions to the article appear to be clealy stated and without bias. They also include relevant information to the subject that is not clearly stated in the article originally. I think these will add to the article well. However, I must agree with Liz that you need to bring over more of the original article into your sandbox. While your contributions certainly look good, just from reading them and the article seperately, it's difficult to determine where exactly you intend to place your contributions. This means that there's no real way to guage if your contributions will effect the tone or flow of the article.

VerdantAurum (talk) 04:18, 1 March 2021 (UTC)