User talk:RedBeeV/sandbox

Peer Edit
The suggested change provides sources from which the information was obtained through weblinks. I feel this should be cited in a different format. The changes suggested are useful to the original article, as it adds new insight on the topic based on new research. I think it should be added to the livespace. The paragraph uses a neutral tone.

I've adjusted my citing, and I will try to add it to the live space.--RedBeeV (talk) 11:37, 17 December 2018 (UTC)