User talk:RedMarket19

Greetings from class
Sample message: Hello! Chen.shuj (talk) 20:06, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, RedMarket19, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review #2
Major Points The article needs a title and some subtitles if possible to help break up the information. The examples provided in the article definitely help to illustrate the concept to someone who is new to this information. According to the readability website, the current grade level for this article is a 9.4. You could use the tool, https://readability-score.com, to help simplify the article even further. Changes in sentence structure could help, especially the shortening of sentence length. Is there any information missing from the article? For instance, ways of coping with the stress? It is important to make sure that the article is as all-encompassing of the topic as possible.

Minor points The attempt to link PTSD to this article was not successful, which can be edited in the wiki code. The article could also benefit from an increase in internal links, for example to words used like “stressor”, “adaptations”, “Acute Stress disorder”, and “psychosomatic illness”. The inclusion of external links could also be helpful sources for readers in conveying the idea of stress. Lastly, the article could also benefit from an image if an appropriate one can be found.

Bagelbites3 (talk) 02:24, 4 April 2016 (UTC)