User talk:RedMarket19/sandbox

RE: Stress (simple wiki)

Currently, when an individual searches "stress" on wikipedia, they are given the option of stress (biology), and within that, eustress and chronic stress. In terms of lengthening this article, thoughts on creating a chronic stress and eustress subsection, and having a search for those exact words redirect to that section within your article.

Add sources (especially for more medical claims like causes heart attacks etc)

Thoughts of linking to outside articles about stress management, acute vs chronic etc.

Major points
The article could benefit from some more internal links within Wikipedia. Because this is an article for simple English, many simple words could be linked to other simple English articles. The article could also benefit from titles and subtitles to help better organize the information. Lastly, references are missing from the article. I’m not sure whether or not it is necessary to include them for a simple English article.

Minor points
This could be hard to find, but if there is an appropriate picture to help demonstrate the idea of stress that could be a beneficial item to include in the article. So far, the article looks appropriate and uses the appropriate language for simple English. It did a good job of explaining the topic with the limited amount of words available for use.

Bagelbites3 (talk) 19:11, 25 March 2016 (UTC)