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Peer Review by Katie Krol
- the first sentence could be split up into 2. - add Illinois after Chicago - change "Rita Hayworth was diagnosed with Alzheimer.." to Alzheimer's disease. - "A Night at Sardi’s is an evening of entertainment that has raised" change 'is' to 'was' - the Blondes vs. Brunettes/RivALZ section looked good! - charity is spelled wrong under the Paint the Night Purple section - Alzheimer's Impact Movement section seems very informative

Overall there was a lot of great information provided. Except for the few couple of errors, the article looked great.