User talk:Redijenny

Burger Shop
The article Burger Shop has been deleted, as it was clearly an advertisement for the game. If you feel this is a genuinely notable game, and you don't have a conflict of interest, then create a properly-sourced new article about it, avoiding any advertising-style language (including the user of the second person), and post it. -- Orange Mike  |  Talk  22:36, 21 December 2007 (UTC)

Hello, well that is unfortunate, I followed the format of another popular casual game on Wikipedia "Diner Dash" (I just didnt add as much content) What was it that was too ad like? (Redijenny (talk) 22:42, 21 December 2007 (UTC))
 * Lack of references to reliable sources; use of second person in describing gameplay. Those were the first two that stood out. -- Orange Mike  |  Talk  22:46, 21 December 2007 (UTC)