User talk:Redwood432/Herb Lubalin

Small edits
I think in the "there he lived," that the "there" seems redundant, you could change it to "He grew up with" if you want to keep the word count otherwise just remove the there. For the color blind section, I would recommend you state that Lubalin was born color blind but it wasn't till early in his education that they found out or something similar. IAMNOTJESUSJR (talk) 17:43, 3 November 2022 (UTC)