User talk:Reesehanson/sandbox

=Evaluations=

1/31/2018 Evaluation by Benjaminshokouhi
Spelling/Grammar[edit] Meets Expectations

Language[edit] Meets Expectations

Organization[edit] Nicely organized

Coding[edit] Meets expectations

Validity[edit] Great job on validation.

Completion[edit] Need some works Relevance[edit] Meets standards Sources[edit] Exceeds exceptions

References[edit] Meets standards

Awesome job.

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard

Romulus is credited for the stealing women from surrounding settlements (Caenina, Crustumerium, and Antemnae), defeating and colonizing said settlements, and then uniting the monarchies of Sabine and Rome. (You needed a verb for the noun Romulus, and I removed the brackets from around the settlement names.)

Servius Tullius is often credited with many reforms that became fundamental to the future Roman Republic; the division of the populace into a new tribal system, the class system based on wealth and military service, and a census. (this is a good sentence for a semi-colon)

Servius Tullius is also credited for the Servian Wall, though the wall is dated to the time of the 4th century BCE and not his 6th century rule. [5] ''(This sentence just felt a little awkward, my change is just a suggestion on how to fix it.) ''

Language
Exceeds Standard

Organization
Meets Standard

Coding
Meets Standard

Validity
Meets Standard.

Completion
Exceeds Standard

Relevance
Meets Standard.

3/16/2018 Evaluation by BenjaminShokouhi
== Spelling/Grammar[edit] Meets Expectations

Language[edit] Exceed expectations.

Organization[edit] Meet standards.

Coding[edit] Meets standards

Validity[edit] Great job on validation.

Completion[edit] Meets standars

Relevance[edit] Meets standards

Sources[edit] Exceeds exceptions. good sources has been used for the third edit

References[edit] Exceeds standards. References are valid and related to the subject Wonderful job I truly enjoyed your third edit. ==