User talk:Relavoie/sandbox

Tyler's peer review
The content that you have already put down looks good. Provides a clear, unbiased view of what you are writing about. Some suggestions to help the article:
 * You noted this at the bottom, but you probably need some more content, but that will probably come as we got closer to the final draft.
 * Need more sources for your work.
 * Add a section about examples of haplotype convergence so people who do not have a very large understanding of this can have a real world comparison for the topic.
 * In the second paragraph, clarify that what you are saying when you put "more common in closely related sequences." Clarify if you mean the genome, or some other entity.

The article looks interesting, hopefully this helps you finish the draft. Jtmitchell2 (talk) 18:01, 16 November 2017 (UTC)