User talk:Remycrowley/Mary Guinan

Hello! I finished a peer review for your article. If you have any questions, just let me know! Thanks Eguest-clemson (talk) 19:54, 31 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi! I've also finished a peer review for your article. Here's the link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Remycrowley/Mary_Guinan/MicrobiologyKat2020_Peer_Review. MicrobiologyKat2020 (talk) 17:15, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Hello! I've finished the peer review of your article re:Mary Guinan. Mtshiel (talk) 20:33, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Hi! As a little informal peer review I suggest rewording a couple sentences to make it sound more like an informative biography and less like a story. Specifically ones like "she encountered her first glass ceiling" and "It was just a week later when she was accepted to the program". You should also consider taking out qualifying words such as "just" and "even" because it is less neutral and adds some of the authors perspective. Biodudette (talk) 03:23, 3 December 2020 (UTC)