User talk:Ren.yij/sandbox

PEER REVIEW

- You did very well in cleaning up the language of the article and making it sound much more neutral than it had been. It seems much more like an actual encyclopedia article than an argument essay than it had before

- Good use of sources as well

- In about three or four places, the spelling or grammar could use a slight bit of work but it's not overly detrimental to the understanding of the article

- Good use of sources

- very good organization

All in all really good job on this. You did well in cleaning up this article and turning it into a comprehensive history of the animation studio.

BlondMetFan