User talk:Ren nkomo

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1.Sub-sections added: film and technology

2. Changed the sub-heading of "The Battle for the Final Cut" to "The Final Cut" Shaniabiju (talk) 13:15, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

3. Additional information title added and sections into bullet points. Shaniabiju (talk) 13:39, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

I am happy to do the research for my group in the releases section Shaniabiju (talk) 12:16, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

There is not reference after the part about the letter Gilliam took out in Variety. Suggested reference and additional info: 'Gilliam took out a full-page ad in the trade magazine Variety urging Sheinberg to release Brazil in its intended version. Sheinberg spoke publicly of his dispute with Gilliam in interviews and ran his own advertisement in Daily Variety offering the sell the film' http://heinonline.org/HOL/Page?handle=hein.journals/cjla14&page=91&collection=journals# Alfie Hill (talk) 13:08, 16 February 2018 (UTC)Alfie Hill

Right, I see what you mean thanks, I'll take a look at this! Ren nkomo (talk) 13:12, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

Replace reference [40] with original book rather than an article referencing the book. Matthews. J (1998) The Battle of Brazil. P.89 ISBN 1557833478 Thorntonjessica (talk) 13:39, 16 February 2018 (UTC)thorntonjessicaThorntonjessica (talk) 13:39, 16 February 2018 (UTC)

yeh, Alfie, I've changed it and added the reference you found. Jess - I've corrected the ref Ren nkomo (talk) 01:21, 18 February 2018 (UTC)