User talk:Renette776

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Hello, Renette776, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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I think the information that you have on this article is good and unbiased as well. Everything is neatly organized and cited correctly. I also noticed that every section has relatively the same amount of information, the parts that need a little more information do, and the parts that don't, don't, which is good. What I would say could be done to improve this article is to just add more information, you could even possibly go more in-depth into the backgrounds of the artists that are involved in the article. Cassidybohne (talk) 02:13, 29 October 2021 (UTC)