User talk:Renownwrtr

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I fixed a few refs for the above article hoping that you might consider further shortening of the article. At present it still reads as over long and over promotional. In that state it is a relatively easy target for any editor to look for deletion. Better balanced articles with better external refs have less chance of deletion. Just a suggestion.  Velella  Velella Talk 21:40, 21 October 2015 (UTC)