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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios (December 7)
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BuySomeApples (talk) 18:25, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios (December 22)
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 Qcne  (talk)  18:04, 22 December 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios (January 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by S0091 were:

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S0091 (talk) 15:33, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:John Canning Studios has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:John Canning Studios. Thanks! S0091 (talk) 16:03, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

Suggestion
See the draft for some sources I found based on a quick search. I suggest making the draft a biography about John Canning rather than company because what I am seeing so far, sources are more focused about him, his background and training, etc. The company can be minimally covered. S0091 (talk) 16:13, 31 January 2024 (UTC)


 * Hmm...actually the more I look at this, I'm not sure. I still think bit more about his background would be helpful given there are at least a couple great sources about him and I added Lenox Library and Taft Museum so take a look at those sources. I think part of the problem is you buried some of better sources in the list.  I think if you move/copy the ones that are in-depth up to the main body and summarize a little of what they say, that will help a lot.  Also, you can use the same source more multiple times so you can still leave it in the list.  I also suggest adding dates to the list of work (date completed).  S0091 (talk) 17:34, 31 January 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios (April 21)
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Jeromeenriquez (talk) 19:17, 21 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios (May 6)
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Toadette Edit! 08:17, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Canning Studios has been accepted
 John Canning Studios, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Thanks again, and happy editing! S0091 (talk) 14:03, 7 June 2024 (UTC)