User talk:RevoultionMusic

Suggestions
On the page you created for Brave Giant, I'm not really interested in working on a page that looks like it was created by a member of the band so I'm posting here instead of creating a talk page for the article itself. If I can make some suggestions though, you have a whole slew of "there" that should be "their". You may want to fix these or even better come up with different wording altogether. With just replacing the word you will still have "their local pubs", "their single", "their performance", etc. It comes across as kind of repetitive to me.

You have a bunch of red-links to things that really don't have significance outside of the band. Band members, albums, etc. Instead of creating multiple small pages without a lot of detail other than "person x is a singer and guitar player for Brave Giant" why not incorporate longer descriptions of the members in this article?

I'm just trying to be helpful so please take this in that spirit. You've made a good start.