User talk:Reyes.hannah/Corporate social responsibility

Hi Hannah. Really good job so far on your wiki article for Corporate social responsibility! The information you have gathered is concise, high level, and is easy to read. You get straight to the point and your sub headers are well organized. --AdvancedWritingProjectDU (talk) 20:40, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

What does the article (or section) do well? The relationship between CSR and company’s financial organization is explained thoroughly. It also explains the initial research that was done to get to a result. This result, as written in the article, emphasizes the benefits of having a positive relation between CSR and a firm’s corporate financial performance. What changes would you suggest overall? I would suggest adding examples of successful, famous companies which utilize CSR and implement them into the mechanics of their company. This will make for a stronger case for CSR, especially for a non-specialized Wikipedia reader. What is the most important thing that the author could do to improve his/her contribution? I think that the author’s work is good, but I would want to know more about CSR in the Emerging Markets vs. Developed Economies section, maybe something relevant to the global pandemic and how CSR could be linked to helping a company’s image survive these economic disruptions. '''Did you glean anything from your classmate's work that could be applicable to your own? If so, let him/her know!''' I wrote about globalization and disease and the coronavirus pandemic. In your article it is stated that CSR enables greater economic efficiency, which is an interesting point I am thinking of adding to my edit.Azizalshalfan (talk) 15:39, 29 May 2020 (UTC)