User talk:Rflores1030/sandbox

Good overview in your article evaluation, Ricardo. Next time, use brackets to turn your article title into a hyperlink. - Kquave (talk) 19:44, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review: Elijah Flores
Focusing on the ethnic group that seems to be most oppressed in the country of Guyana is a good basis and could actually be used for an entire 500 words. However, i do not think the anecdote about your personal life will mesh well with a typical wikipedia article. I would focus more on numerical statistics, such as crime rates by ethnic group or disproportionate arrest rates. While personal anecdotes may be relatable, it does not fit as well in a piece of scholarly information. The closing information about the state of today's Guyana and those who are more accepted based on conformity may be something to expand further on, as long as you are able to find information. EliFlo27 (talk) 19:12, 21 October 2018 (UTC)