User talk:Rfwh/sandbox

Hello, your page is looking good. I do feel the topic is quite heavy for people who are simply reading, a simple suggestion is in your "holistic discussion" section I'd suggest using a few more interlinks, you can definitely use one for genetic drift. It's a common concept, but not known to everyone. I think the page is coming along nicely. D.jae.lee (talk) 10:47, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Hey,

You have a well written paper but I also think it might be a bit heavy for some readers. I would suggest not including primary data such as your bullet for CD spectra. Make sure you straighten out your citations too. Additionally, I do not know if you need to make so many sub sections especially if there is just one sentence in it, such as your stochiometry section. Other than that it looks good.

Good luck, Batcheld (talk) 16:06, 2 March 2015 (UTC)