User talk:Rgree46/sandbox

Copyedit an Article
Good job. Just keep in mind that both "colors" and "colours" are permitted on Wikipedia. Different countries have different spelling standards, and you need to look at each individual article to see which standard it follows. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:28, 25 February 2018 (UTC)

Adding Sources
You should add excerpts from each source that directly support what the article says. Without this one-to-one comparison, I cannot verify whether your sources are relevant. Post your revision within a week. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:58, 4 March 2018 (UTC)


 * I see you decided to work on "Animal feed" instead. Your sources look really good, but once again, you need copy excerpts from each source into the sandbox to show that the source directly supports what is in the WP article. Do it as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:22, 22 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Go ahead and add the sources to the article. Be sure to format the citations correctly, using bibliographic information rather than links to databases. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:00, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * The sources are now properly formatted in the sandbox. Add them to the article! Josef Horáček (talk) 18:30, 5 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding a Lead to "Easy Listening"
This article does have a lead, but the lead contains info not included elsewhere in the article. I wasn't aware this was a problem. You should look at WP policies to verify if this is a concern, and if so, you can fix the article by adding the info from the lead to the individual sections. Post your revision to the sandbox withing a week.

Your other option is to choose another article. If you choose this option, choose an article as soon as possible for approval. Josef Horáček (talk) 21:01, 1 April 2018 (UTC)


 * "Clog dance" is a good article to work on. Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Good job. In the first sentence, "dance" should be lower-case. Also, the sentence about wooden shoes being worn to work is out of place. Do you even need it? I suggest you delete it. Then go ahead and post the article. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:42, 23 April 2018 (UTC)


 * You added the lead in the wrong spot, but someone else fixed it already. You're done with this assignment! Josef Horáček (talk) 23:39, 28 April 2018 (UTC)