User talk:Rhain11123/Yunnan cuisine/Yuting Cui Peer Review

First, you should better to use your own words to summarize the main point in "Yunnan is known as the "fungus kingdom", "plant kingdom" and "animal kingdom"." this sentence. Second, people can not add their personal opinion on Wikipedia projects. "It is one of the regions with the most abundant edible wild fungus resources in China and even the world." It is true that Yunnan is the most abundant edible wild fungus resources in china, but it does not mean the most abundant in the world. Finally, you can add a little information about the example in your list, like their names. (Yuting Cui (talk) 03:37, 21 November 2019 (UTC))