User talk:Rheinj

I enjoyed reading your text. The theme is very up-to date, especially in Germany.

Therefore I think it was very good, that you made a direct connection between "Work-Live Balance" (WLB) and Germany in your article. I also liked the fact you've backed up your text with many figures and facts and that you were also looking at the future developments of WLB.

Maybe you could have shown the implementation of WLB via a practical example. For instance, the "Schott AG" in Mainz, Germany offers a variety of ways to give consideration the WLB needs.

Apart from this small suggestion, I think your text is really very well written, especially knowing that English is not your native language. In addition, you linked unfamiliar terms to other articles at Wikipedia - which I think is very good! Thus, each reader has the possibility to look up unfamiliar terms within one click.

I hope you are happy about my feedback.

Well done – kind regards Elle & Vire

Thank you for your feedback. It was very helpful. I have to add that I am not a native speaker in English, but I think you meant that.

Yes of course!!!! Sorry but I made a little mistake there. I will correct that - thank you for this comment.

Hi Rheinj,

your Wiki article about Work-Life-Balance is very well written and informative. You give a short, yet comprehensible introduction to this complex topic, which encourages the reader to read the rest of the article with full attention. I like how you use the current debate in German society as lead-in and are thus able to give real-life examples. This way, the article remains vivid, even though the topic of WLB might be rather abstract. Your English is very elevated, fitting for this academic topic. The technical terms are spot-on.

As improvement, you might add more paragraphs and minor headings. This improves the reading flow and helps the reader to find the parts that are of the most interest to him more quickly.

Good luck in your further studies! Matmagic — Preceding unsigned comment added by Matmagic (talk • contribs) 13:41, 6 July 2011 (UTC)